Not having done one of these for a while - in fact not having done much of anything for a while - I 'm providing this quote as a public service.
The Tribune-Review provided this gem;
"The shooting happened in Delaware Township, about 60 miles north of Pittsburgh where the girl remains hospitalized in critical condition."
I can accept the girl being in a hospital, that perhaps it is in Delaware Twp. and that Delaware Twp. is 60 miles north of Pittsburgh, but, I don't believe that's what the writer means.
Giving the Trib some credit, the story isn't bylined, so I suspect it's an AP rewrite. Still, someone should proof this stuff......
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